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Nene Everling
Outside The Festival
Judge 1:The inter-action of the people in the foreground could have been displayed and brought to the front by cropping the picture tighter. I like the use of lines and angles. The emotion from the faces would have made this a much more interesting photograph. Judge 2:I am interested in the people in the foreground and had to work to find the festival. If the image were cropped just above the clouds, a little to the left of the water tower, and a 15%-20% above the bottom, we would get more of the couple and the festival without cropping a meaningful element. There is a loss of detail in the shadows on the woman on the sea wall. Judge 3:This compitation needs work especially with the woman.

38
Nene Everling
Outside The Festival
Judge 1:The inter-action of the people in the foreground could have been displayed and brought to the front by cropping the picture tighter. I like the use of lines and angles. The emotion from the faces would have made this a much more interesting photograph. Judge 2:I am interested in the people in the foreground and had to work to find the festival. If the image were cropped just above the clouds, a little to the left of the water tower, and a 15%-20% above the bottom, we would get more of the couple and the festival without cropping a meaningful element. There is a loss of detail in the shadows on the woman on the sea wall. Judge 3:This compitation needs work especially with the woman.
Camera: Canon (Canon Eos 20d) |
Original size: 2553px x 1702px |
Current: 400px x 267px |
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filename: _MG_4896 Outside The Festival 12x8x212_815 for upload |