OrlandoCameraClub > 38	
Nene Everling	
Outside The Festival		

Judge 1:The inter-action of the people in the foreground could have been displayed and brought to the front by cropping the picture tighter.  I like the use of lines and angles.  The emotion from the faces would have made this a much more interesting photograph. Judge 2:I am interested in the people in the foreground and had to work to find the festival.  If the image were cropped just above the clouds, a little to the left of the water tower, and a 15%-20% above the bottom, we would get more of the couple and the festival without cropping a meaningful element.  There is a loss of detail in the shadows on the woman on the sea wall.   Judge 3:This compitation needs work especially with the woman.
OrlandoCameraClub > Winter Training GroundsNene Everling  Judge 1:I must disqualify myself from judging this image because I suspect that I know who the photographer is.  Judge 2:Very creative and the angle adds interest. Not sure I'd know it's Florida.  Judge 3:Interesting choice to tilt the image but not sure it serves the content as, alone, the content is compelling.  Try cropping in to the horses and riders for a more powerful statement.
OrlandoCameraClub > Virginia Creeper Versus The Gatepost by: Nane Everling 

Judge 1 :No real center of interest here.Judge 2 :The image lacks a focal point and cries out for a third color. There is a lot of dead space on the right that does not conrtribute.Judge 3: Good choice of opposing primary colors. However, it  is difficult to know what the photo to is trying to convey. The image needs to be either tighter or wider. And it needs to be straightened.
38
Nene Everling
Outside The Festival

Judge 1:The inter-action of the people in the foreground could have been displayed and brought to the front by cropping the picture tighter. I like the use of lines and angles. The emotion from the faces would have made this a much more interesting photograph. Judge 2:I am interested in the people in the foreground and had to work to find the festival. If the image were cropped just above the clouds, a little to the left of the water tower, and a 15%-20% above the bottom, we would get more of the couple and the festival without cropping a meaningful element. There is a loss of detail in the shadows on the woman on the sea wall. Judge 3:This compitation needs work especially with the woman.
OrlandoCameraClub > 38	
Nene Everling	
Outside The Festival		

Judge 1:The inter-action of the people in the foreground could have been displayed and brought to the front by cropping the picture tighter.  I like the use of lines and angles.  The emotion from the faces would have made this a much more interesting photograph. Judge 2:I am interested in the people in the foreground and had to work to find the festival.  If the image were cropped just above the clouds, a little to the left of the water tower, and a 15%-20% above the bottom, we would get more of the couple and the festival without cropping a meaningful element.  There is a loss of detail in the shadows on the woman on the sea wall.   Judge 3:This compitation needs work especially with the woman.
38
Nene Everling
Outside The Festival

Judge 1:The inter-action of the people in the foreground could have been displayed and brought to the front by cropping the picture tighter. I like the use of lines and angles. The emotion from the faces would have made this a much more interesting photograph. Judge 2:I am interested in the people in the foreground and had to work to find the festival. If the image were cropped just above the clouds, a little to the left of the water tower, and a 15%-20% above the bottom, we would get more of the couple and the festival without cropping a meaningful element. There is a loss of detail in the shadows on the woman on the sea wall. Judge 3:This compitation needs work especially with the woman.
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