OrlandoCameraClub > 10
Jeanee James
Unconditional
Judge 1:Awesome composition…awesome subjects!  The background texture is not faint enough, and draws one's eye away from the subject somewhat.  Creatively this is a winner! Judge 2:The tenderness depicted in this image is exceptional.  The only compositional change that could improve this image is to move the subject just a little to the right of the frame making less negative space behind the mother and more in front.  The lighting is a little hot on the clothing and the baby's right foot.  Since  the direction of the light on the face  is good, perhaps it could have been modified with a scrim or flag.   Judge 3:Beautiful portrait showing lots of emotion. Dress a little bright.
10
Jeanee James
Unconditional
Judge 1:Awesome composition…awesome subjects! The background texture is not faint enough, and draws one's eye away from the subject somewhat. Creatively this is a winner! Judge 2:The tenderness depicted in this image is exceptional. The only compositional change that could improve this image is to move the subject just a little to the right of the frame making less negative space behind the mother and more in front. The lighting is a little hot on the clothing and the baby's right foot. Since the direction of the light on the face is good, perhaps it could have been modified with a scrim or flag. Judge 3:Beautiful portrait showing lots of emotion. Dress a little bright.
OrlandoCameraClub > 10
Jeanee James
Unconditional
Judge 1:Awesome composition…awesome subjects!  The background texture is not faint enough, and draws one's eye away from the subject somewhat.  Creatively this is a winner! Judge 2:The tenderness depicted in this image is exceptional.  The only compositional change that could improve this image is to move the subject just a little to the right of the frame making less negative space behind the mother and more in front.  The lighting is a little hot on the clothing and the baby's right foot.  Since  the direction of the light on the face  is good, perhaps it could have been modified with a scrim or flag.   Judge 3:Beautiful portrait showing lots of emotion. Dress a little bright.
10
Jeanee James
Unconditional
Judge 1:Awesome composition…awesome subjects! The background texture is not faint enough, and draws one's eye away from the subject somewhat. Creatively this is a winner! Judge 2:The tenderness depicted in this image is exceptional. The only compositional change that could improve this image is to move the subject just a little to the right of the frame making less negative space behind the mother and more in front. The lighting is a little hot on the clothing and the baby's right foot. Since the direction of the light on the face is good, perhaps it could have been modified with a scrim or flag. Judge 3:Beautiful portrait showing lots of emotion. Dress a little bright.
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